graphic design is not my passion but I think the C is too circular (or at the very least, the gap in it is too small, it doesn't immediately recognize as a C in my brain, it just looks like a circle), and the gem or whatever inside it may be a bit too big.
Oh and the centering is off, should be more like this:
there might also be something up with the kerning of the C (the gap between C and R) but honestly just fixing the L/R centering of guardian and adjusting the C/gem proportions a touch will look pretty good to me I think!
graphic design is not my passion but I think the C is too circular (or at the very least, the gap in it is too small, it doesn't immediately recognize as a C in my brain, it just looks like a circle), and the gem or whatever inside it may be a bit too big.
Oh and the centering is off, should be more like this:
I thought the same thing about the gem, actually. Easy fix at this point.
C will be trickier since widening the gap will mean I'll have to redraw the serifs at an angle, but that should be manageable.
EDIT: Thanks for the recentering!
there might also be something up with the kerning of the C (the gap between C and R) but honestly just fixing the L/R centering of guardian and adjusting the C/gem proportions a touch will look pretty good to me I think!
idk how kerning works, but some asshole taught me to recognize when it's slightly off lol