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Let me know if there are any more suggestions. Regarding certain role changes, please suggest a way to make the changes accessible. I'm not going to add any more walls of text, so the changes should be user friendly and understandable without the text.

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  • betelgeuse [comrade/them]
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    7 months ago

    Lose the paragraphs at the top. Don't use specific names, just titles and their descriptions. Make it into a chart instead of a list. Don't do the portraits either. The no names and no photos will work in your favor from a propaganda standpoint.

    • What_Religion_R_They [none/use name]
      hexagon
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      7 months ago

      It's certainly different. I was intrigued by your suggestion, because at face value it sounds correct that the no name/no photo thing will be better as you don't come into it with your presuppositions, but it seems not as impactful IMO. You can't tell at a glance that it's one person occupying multiple posts. I think it's very much a knowing your target audience thing.

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