• voight [he/him, any]
    hexagon
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    edit-2
    5 months ago

    How's my title game? This feels like a 4/10. Lotta things are off, missing a hyphen. Idk just feels very lackluster and only redeemed by not obviously being in all caps

    [trying to mug you] "how's my trigger discipline?"

    • ReadFanon [any, any]
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      5 months ago

      I'd put the lede at the front:

      US coalition launches full-scale assault on Iran in response to cruise missile strikes from Houthi controlled territory on at least 20 Saudi oil refineries

      Or alternatively for something less verbose:

      Missiles from Houthi controlled territory strike 20+ Saudi oil refineries, US coalition responds with full-scale assault on Iran