As you all know, I have been writing a novel and this is the writing community...

This video by Shaun is actually pretty inspiring. The idea that JKRowling went from zero to billionaire by writing a series that had so many stupid mistakes in it lifts quite a burden off my shoulders.

I've seen the Harry Potter movies, they're not bad, nor are they particularly amazing. Well, it is amazing that they actually got made and fully budgeted until the end. The Narnia series after the third movie had to abort to save the wallet of the producers, Pirates of the Caribbean made a deep dive into the bottom of the ocean of low quality, The Hobbit was bad in ways mere mortals are not qualified to explain. I'd have swapped the amount of production effort HP and PotC got to the last movie if I could.

The Harry Potter directors were smart enough to cut out some of JKR's weird shit. I didn't read past the third novel. I only watched the movies, and they did make a good job of toning down the worst parts of the bullying and slavery apologia. I can see where HP movie fans and HP theory readers can have very different understandings of how JKR talked about slavery.

There is probably a large Venn Diagram intersection of people who downplay the slavery and people who pretended to read the whole series to the end for some kind of clout.

As I write, I'm meticulously paranoid about details that don't mean something later in the story, or dig a hole that later becomes a plothole and gets forgotten instead of filled. In fact, I'm kind of worried that my paranoia could make the novel(s) incompletable.

Sherlock Is Garbage, And Here's Why - Hbomberguy[1:49:52] dabbles a bit on that with the recent BBC sherlock series. He notes a director who is apparently talented at building up, but is utterly incapable of actually building to a destination. I had already felt like Sherlock was off, and Hbomberguy just happened to release a damning video that precisely articulates why I liked individual episodes of Sherlock, but felt the series as a whole wasn't adding up. Because really, it literally was just kind of going nowhere, but with the aesthetics of about to get there. And Sherlock wasn't the first series the director ruined for Hbomberguy.

Game of Thrones is an interesting example. The guy's ending was clearly a shower thought, he built a world, he built several books. Maybe he built something so big he couldn't finish it. This could be me in 10 years (minus the financial success, statistically speaking).

I have to walk the tight rope between a story with no errors or accidental loose ends, but also a story that cleanly arrives with a satisfying destination.

Best of luck to everyone.

  • Sea_Gull [they/them]
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    3 years ago

    I love critiques on bad writing and see them as inspirational too. A lot of these people seem to have such huge egos that they wouldn't take criticism. I on the other hand tend to over-correct.

    But now that I'm away from people who told me outright that they don't like fantasy, I can better work with what I have.

    Seeing things like those videos really helps when I'm revising my draft.

    I don't see myself so much as on a tight rope, but throwing a grappling hook at a mountain and hoping to climb up without fucking up. I know where the end point is, but I just have to keep going and make sure I have a strong anchor.

    I'm excited that we have so many writers here.

    Also one thing that's helped me with details is having two docs open - one for the story/manuscript/chapter and one for the details I want to add/address.

    Then I can double check both to make sure I have everything I want to say. Like implementing foreshadowing or renaming a character I didn't like. It's been nice because putting it all on one doc is exhausting and not fun to look at and I need to put my scathing self-critique somewhere.