I wrote a 3520 piece trying to outline a good metaphor of the class struggle as it is constituted today in America. I’m sure it’s cringe but it’s also the first thing I’ve enjoyed and been remotely proud of writing in a very long time. Would people here actually read it and give me feedback? I would be extremely grateful for the pain please and thank you

  • QuillQuote [they/them]
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    4 years ago

    Line breaks are your friend! I don't mind huge posts on here, as long as it's not an enormous unbroken wall

    give me discrete paragraphs I can digest and it doesn't really matter how many of them there are in a row

    and in case you didn't know, to make a line break here just do 2 returns before the next line, and you can click the preview button to see how the final formatting will look before you post

    :heart-sickle: