• miz [any, any]
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      1 day ago

      just wrote a rap lyric please rate my bars:

      all dressed up with my hoodie and my mask on
      take me to a CEO party and I'll do shots like Lil Jon

      • btfod [he/him, comrade/them]
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        edit-2
        23 hours ago

        squirtle-jam

        they say it's good to face your demons but I shot mine in the back

        he took a stagger step, I worked the rack, and hit him with the double tap

        • miz [any, any]
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          edit-2
          23 hours ago

          clear the jam nice and smooth I got ice in my veins
          what was in my target is runnin' down the drains

          • btfod [he/him, comrade/them]
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            23 hours ago

            turn me loose, I'm juiced off fraud, waste, and abuse

            CEO on the floor, I cop a bike and vamoose

              • btfod [he/him, comrade/them]
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                22 hours ago

                I got his priors authorizin

                The media's chastisin

                But anyone who ever read an EOB ain't sympathisin

                (thanks for making my lunch break extra fun today)

                  • btfod [he/him, comrade/them]
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                    22 hours ago

                    aww thanks, been a long time since it felt this nice to write shit. thanks for the inspiration today. damn my responsibilities I wanna keep writing! if I can keep the spark alive I'll finish and post it later

                    • btfod [he/him, comrade/them]
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                      edit-2
                      21 hours ago

                      pretend this came after sympathizin:

                      or had a loved one who chose between meds for their kid or feeding themselves

                      and picked the former one

                      e: lol while thinking of the next line I caught I rhymed one with one, time to stop for now but it's been fun

                      • Hohsia [he/him]
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                        17 hours ago

                        You need to add a line that ends with the sample “it’s Luigi time” from Mario

                        Maybe something like “something something something and you call it a crime but I say [insert sample]