• miz [any, any]
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    1 day ago

    just wrote a rap lyric please rate my bars:

    all dressed up with my hoodie and my mask on
    take me to a CEO party and I'll do shots like Lil Jon

    • btfod [he/him, comrade/them]
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      23 hours ago

      squirtle-jam

      they say it's good to face your demons but I shot mine in the back

      he took a stagger step, I worked the rack, and hit him with the double tap

      • miz [any, any]
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        23 hours ago

        clear the jam nice and smooth I got ice in my veins
        what was in my target is runnin' down the drains

        • btfod [he/him, comrade/them]
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          23 hours ago

          turn me loose, I'm juiced off fraud, waste, and abuse

          CEO on the floor, I cop a bike and vamoose

            • btfod [he/him, comrade/them]
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              22 hours ago

              I got his priors authorizin

              The media's chastisin

              But anyone who ever read an EOB ain't sympathisin

              (thanks for making my lunch break extra fun today)

                • btfod [he/him, comrade/them]
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                  22 hours ago

                  aww thanks, been a long time since it felt this nice to write shit. thanks for the inspiration today. damn my responsibilities I wanna keep writing! if I can keep the spark alive I'll finish and post it later

                  • btfod [he/him, comrade/them]
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                    edit-2
                    21 hours ago

                    pretend this came after sympathizin:

                    or had a loved one who chose between meds for their kid or feeding themselves

                    and picked the former one

                    e: lol while thinking of the next line I caught I rhymed one with one, time to stop for now but it's been fun

                    • Hohsia [he/him]
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                      17 hours ago

                      You need to add a line that ends with the sample “it’s Luigi time” from Mario

                      Maybe something like “something something something and you call it a crime but I say [insert sample]