Okay, I know it sounds cringe. I get it… but I’ve put a whole lotta time into this one. It’s been a work in progress for the past two months or so, and I’m only on my 2nd rough draft. I’m really just seeking some basic criticism. I haven’t found an appropriate beat yet, but I’m looking for something kinda boom-bap. Lots of snare.
Basically, this is the gist of it.
yeah… yeah yeah… yo… check check i love being socialist hammer and sickle but all these stupid tankies are stupd and fickle i never farm because farming is an authleft lie stupid tankies in a evil china communist mind…
lame ass tankies u think ur communist you’re notanist you think you rock but you flopping in this politics are my game and I make it freaking rule lib soc rule and tankies drool
im so tired of all these stupid tankies all the meme on vaush channel are super freaking dankie i think it’s obvious I’ve won time to drop the mic stupid tabkies could never hold a LIGHT!!!!
Remember, this is just a rough draft. Obviously I’ll work out the kinks and typos. Can I please get some criticism? CONSTRUCTIVE ONLY. I don’t appreciate bullying.
edit: THANKS FOR THE GOLD KIND REDDITORS!
This is some good satire TBF it's bad enough to be fully cringe but not bad enough that the Vaushites can detect that the joke is at how cringe they are.
I think it's pretty funny, yeah. They are obviously doing a bit.
My rap about shitting your pants was funnier tho ngl
You will have to do a rap battle to settle it once and for all.