Okay, I know it sounds cringe. I get it… but I’ve put a whole lotta time into this one. It’s been a work in progress for the past two months or so, and I’m only on my 2nd rough draft. I’m really just seeking some basic criticism. I haven’t found an appropriate beat yet, but I’m looking for something kinda boom-bap. Lots of snare.

Basically, this is the gist of it.

yeah… yeah yeah… yo… check check i love being socialist hammer and sickle but all these stupid tankies are stupd and fickle i never farm because farming is an authleft lie stupid tankies in a evil china communist mind…

lame ass tankies u think ur communist you’re notanist you think you rock but you flopping in this politics are my game and I make it freaking rule lib soc rule and tankies drool

im so tired of all these stupid tankies all the meme on vaush channel are super freaking dankie i think it’s obvious I’ve won time to drop the mic stupid tabkies could never hold a LIGHT!!!!

Remember, this is just a rough draft. Obviously I’ll work out the kinks and typos. Can I please get some criticism? CONSTRUCTIVE ONLY. I don’t appreciate bullying.

edit: THANKS FOR THE GOLD KIND REDDITORS!