We've all heard of the Bechdel test. I know it's not a cure-all to sexism and hidden patriarchy, but it is a good question to ask as a writer.

For those who don't know, the original "Bechdel test" posited that 99% of movies don't have two female characters talking to each other about something other than a male. Basically that women in fiction usually exists just to further the plot of male characters.

My novel is first person PoV of a middle school boy and he's part of a trio with two other teenage girls (these are the main 3 characters). But because he is the only PoV, it can never pass "the Bechdel test." Otherwise, I think I've made the other two main characters fairly fleshed out characters.

  • swampfox [none/use name]
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    edit-2
    3 years ago

    I feel like if you really wanted to you could resolve this by either having a written/recorded exchange (thus escaping the dilemma temporally) between the two women or you could have some intentional/unintentional eavesdropping.

    • StuporTrooper [he/him]
      hexagon
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      3 years ago

      There's some unintentional eavesdropping already, I pretty frequently have the Protagonist walk into a heated exchange between the other two, which they quickly hush to resolve.