First things first CW: violence, suicide, sexism, racism but all done satirically if that changes things

This is an etherpad (It's like google docs but without the evil corporate data mining) link to it: https://rich.etherpad.com/p/r.11e54ca11de75dd143910cae7a71a4ba

The premise for the story is a game show as absurdist allegories for capitalism in general, and USA in particular. Long term I'm hoping to animate the text into like a super stylized subtitle to really emphasize the game show-y-ness and be able to control tone and timing to help humor come through in text. But that'll be a lot of additional work so I'm trying to get the text locked down (or depending on feedback locked away) before that.

So, any feedback is appreciated, particularly at this point just pass/fail "Do you think this project is worth continuing with?"

Thanks and I hope you have as much fun reading as I did writing!