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  • Tommasi [she/her]
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    1 year ago

    I think they can be really add to a novel if done right, a good metaphor or simile can help set the scene and make the writing more evocative. It can also be a nice, subtle way to give the reader some insight into the POV character's emotional state without being too direct.

    That being said, a bad metaphor really sticks out and makes the text actively worse to read.