I'm trying to be a writer. One thing I like to write about are things I hate so I wrote about think tanks. In about 2k words it's essentially about why they're bad and shouldn't be trusted. Oh and one laid me off in October.
It's not really edited and some of it may not flow very well. I also copied it into docs so the spacing is weird but didn't feel like fixing it. I also ripped off a phrase I heard on chapo one time. I feel like Matt said it but I can't really remember. I think the hyperlinks make the read better but do as you please. Idk if I'm looking for specific feedback but if you have any sort of comment I'd love to hear it.
Thanks a heap.
Also, I made up the name on the docs account so don't worry.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18LH7Dic-BG6dbstPIjHSsZ5oPjgPXlL-TIFGrL8q0BU/edit
I liked it! A couple references I did not get but I don't think it took away from the pieces efficacy. Made me laugh at several points too. Very evocative writing. As you say it could do with an edit, but I have some attention issues and I could stick with it.
Thank you thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the piece!