I would put it slightly diffrent. The power insert main character is a writer that has three hot female assistants, but also is a doctor and a lawyer. Grok comes from the Martians who are so right about everything that when they say things reality changes. So specifically not his self insert but from the power of drugs and space sex.
That doesn't sound particularly better to me; it's all a blur of Heinlein's feverish horny power fantasies so I may have missed some of the details before I put it down again.
I would put it slightly diffrent. The power insert main character is a writer that has three hot female assistants, but also is a doctor and a lawyer. Grok comes from the Martians who are so right about everything that when they say things reality changes. So specifically not his self insert but from the power of drugs and space sex.
That doesn't sound particularly better to me; it's all a blur of Heinlein's feverish horny power fantasies so I may have missed some of the details before I put it down again.
It don't think it is particularly better, just instresting in the ways it is weirder