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You have left exactly the right amount of ambiguity around the question of whether the hot dogs are made out of babies, so for that reason alone I'd suggest you don't change anything.
"Any pretext is fine" is kinda confusing though I think I understand it, and so is the random inclusion of George Orwell, don't really get that part at all tbh.
Yeah I had to zoom in on the shirt to see dungledore
electronics manufacturing does prolly involve more toddler crushing than the stupid wizard game.