Between the desire
And the spasm
Between the potency
And the existence
Between the essence
And the descent
Falls the Shadow
*Not with a bang but a whimper *

      • OutrageousHairdo [he/him]
        ·
        1 year ago

        Yeah it has a terminal case of "Middle School Essay syndrome" where it's formulaic and lacking in wit or elegance.

    • DiltoGeggins [none/use name]
      hexagon
      ·
      1 year ago

      yes, and not a half bad job, either. btw, thank you for reading the article, after many years on reddit, its a refreshing change. cheers.