Yeah, I read online when I was looking for examples myself about how
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::: Young teen Dany describes her own breasts in a very male gazey way.
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and I agree with that criticism. Its not necessary and doesn't serve a narrative purpose. My objection was that there's not enough of it there for it to be a core engagement for the fans of the books. When I read discussions about it on /r/asoiaf, they're most people there seem to regret that its there and see it as a flaw in the text.
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Yeah, I read online when I was looking for examples myself about how
(cw sexualizaiton of minors)
spoiler
::: Young teen Dany describes her own breasts in a very male gazey way.
:::
and I agree with that criticism. Its not necessary and doesn't serve a narrative purpose. My objection was that there's not enough of it there for it to be a core engagement for the fans of the books. When I read discussions about it on /r/asoiaf, they're most people there seem to regret that its there and see it as a flaw in the text.
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