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"A car on the train tracks caused an East LA Metro train to derail"
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·5 hours agoNo, the fart is big enough to single-handledly cause climate disaster that not even communists can fix. Earth is doomed.
Fair enough but establishing a causative form is critical here. As written, the train is to blame for striking the car in the same way a car is to blame for striking the pedestrian.