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  • disco [any]
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    4 years ago

    Yeah, I know what OP was getting at, but the passive voice would involve phrasing akin to “a person was shot”

      • disco [any]
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        4 years ago

        Grammatically it's called a gerund. In this context the problem is mainly that it's ambiguous. An "officer involved shooting" could refer to a police officer getting shot by someone else, even though everyone knows that really means a case of a cop shooting somebody, because its almost never the other way around.

        • Janked [he/him]
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          4 years ago

          And that's why people hate grammar nerds, because while it's pedantically correct, pointing it out does nothing but attempt to take away from the point that was already communicated clearly enough to be understood.

          • disco [any]
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            4 years ago

            actually, people like me and think I'm cool

          • GreenTeaRedFlag [any]
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            4 years ago

            Pointing out it makes you better at identifying what is going on when and why. Saying "they write it to make the officer look good or neutral" is an opinion, "they write it using passive voice, which distances the officer from his actions" is a fact. And here, passive voice isn't employed, so you have made yourself that much easier to shoot down and ignore when criticizing the media. Carefully and correctly showing someone how they are being lied to is the only way to really get them to acknowledge that someone is controlling the narrative.

            • Janked [he/him]
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              4 years ago

              If someone's support hinges on something being grammatically correct, I think I can rightfully dismiss them.

              I get your point, but your example is bad.