He didn’t like that I didn’t heed his advice, that I did put in a shower scene but specifically to spite him I made it about the sensation of being clean, refreshed, and lightened without describing her naked body and instead describing how she’d actually feel finally having a clean and safe environment for a change.
as a woman with big "unbothered. moisturized. in my lane" energy, i can't tell you enough how much i love this.
I still remember reading a sci-fi novel (short story?) from a famous author (whose name I forgot, but he's one of those pre-70's sci-fi authors) and there were three characters in the introductory scene. I still have no idea why he felt it necessary to tell the audience about the woman's breasts; I know she has them, I really wasn't assuming otherwise.
I can't recall, but I do remember it was three of them on Mars and they were attempting to hide that they were there. I believe the people on Mars and (Earth?) were two separate factions in this story.
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It would be even funnier if you put a sex scene in, but exclusively describe the guy's body and actions.
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Officer, I can explain! I was only writing this incredibly detailed smut to own the perverts!
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as a woman with big "unbothered. moisturized. in my lane" energy, i can't tell you enough how much i love this.
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I still remember reading a sci-fi novel (short story?) from a famous author (whose name I forgot, but he's one of those pre-70's sci-fi authors) and there were three characters in the introductory scene. I still have no idea why he felt it necessary to tell the audience about the woman's breasts; I know she has them, I really wasn't assuming otherwise.
Was it Niven
I can't recall, but I do remember it was three of them on Mars and they were attempting to hide that they were there. I believe the people on Mars and (Earth?) were two separate factions in this story.
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https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rainbow_Mars
Oh, definitely not that. I think the author may have been Philip K Dick as for a while there I was really interested in his stories.
Gotcha. I read Rainbow Mars last year and was struck by how breastily the women boobed.