I'm tryna learn perspective and drawing and all that. Got inspired by a Ramadan celebration in Gaza that someone posted about here a few days ago. What do you reckon?

  • Smeagolicious [they/them]
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    2 years ago

    Wow! Beautiful colors and I love the minimal lines & forms here! Looks like such a friendly place

      • Smeagolicious [they/them]
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        2 years ago

        I don’t think extra details would ruin anything here! Possibly post the final if/when you do make some changes? 👀

      • Sephitard9001 [he/him]
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        2 years ago

        My only critique as somebody with no artistic skill is the sky seems a little too empty or there's too much of one color. It's a perfectly realistic color for the sky to be on any given time of day, but I think if you experimented with more of a very subtle gradient or maybe have it set in a later time of day where one side of the sky would be off-color or slightly darker than the other, it wouldn't feel like all washed out. On the top right corner, I really like how you did the clouds though, those feel really natural like they belong there

      • TheBeatles [any]
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        2 years ago

        I think some more plants could help liven it up a bit 🌱

        but it already looks really good, it's very close to what I imagine housing would like in a socialist utopia - spaces designed for people and community and not cars. simple architecture with vibrant colors, love it