I'm tryna learn perspective and drawing and all that. Got inspired by a Ramadan celebration in Gaza that someone posted about here a few days ago. What do you reckon?

  • Sephitard9001 [he/him]
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    1 year ago

    This has a really good sense of depth and the colors are poppin' the fuck off the page. I was tricked into thinking this was a screenshot from some indie FPS game by the thumbnail at first

      • bubbalu [they/them]
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        1 year ago

        you coulda fooled me; those buildings have so much character! for real though trying to remember what this reminds me of.

        • DoghouseCharlie [he/him, comrade/them]
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          1 year ago

          I used a lot of these for reference https://unicornriot.ninja/2023/colorful-neighborhood-in-gaza-celebrates-ramadan-with-vibrant-colors/

    • booty [he/him]
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      1 year ago

      I honestly thought that's what it was for the first few seconds after I opened the full image. It's a great style.

  • UlyssesT [he/him]
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    1 year ago

    I already think it's great! When you want to revisit the same idea, don't be afraid to add some perspective-flexible features such as food stalls and the like, especially in the foreground.

  • Changeling [it/its]
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    1 year ago

    I thought this was computer rendered at first. I don’t know shit about art but I have an art friend that told me to start paying attention to what art makes me feel something and this really does. I don’t know what it is, but thank you for making this.

  • Smeagolicious [they/them]
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    1 year ago

    Wow! Beautiful colors and I love the minimal lines & forms here! Looks like such a friendly place

      • Sephitard9001 [he/him]
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        1 year ago

        My only critique as somebody with no artistic skill is the sky seems a little too empty or there's too much of one color. It's a perfectly realistic color for the sky to be on any given time of day, but I think if you experimented with more of a very subtle gradient or maybe have it set in a later time of day where one side of the sky would be off-color or slightly darker than the other, it wouldn't feel like all washed out. On the top right corner, I really like how you did the clouds though, those feel really natural like they belong there

      • Smeagolicious [they/them]
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        1 year ago

        I don’t think extra details would ruin anything here! Possibly post the final if/when you do make some changes? 👀

      • TheBeatles [any]
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        1 year ago

        I think some more plants could help liven it up a bit 🌱

        but it already looks really good, it's very close to what I imagine housing would like in a socialist utopia - spaces designed for people and community and not cars. simple architecture with vibrant colors, love it

  • AHopeOnceMore [he/him]B
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    1 year ago

    Beautiful and reminds me of parts of Sable, itself an homage to Möbius. Probably because of the clean lines, palette, and house stylr.

  • invalidusernamelol [he/him]M
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    1 year ago

    You should try to model this in something like Blender. Would be fun to play with lighting in a scene like this.

  • came_apart_at_Kmart [he/him, comrade/them]
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    1 year ago

    i can't remember what this kind of perspective study is called. like 2 point horizon? this is great. mine always came out feeling sterile and boxy to me, like not enough articulation to the structures. your feels like a place that is currently still, but where people actually do live. i really like the hanging lanterns and curios and the realistic slack to the lines. i also like the purple rug on the green building.

    the value in these exercises is incredible, imo. i got more into painting later in life and found myself going back to these tricks and some videos i watched about color "value" to suggest depth. i really like art like this, because it turns flat surfaces into windows that suggest other worlds.

    i see myself living in the peach colored building, on the second floor veranda. enjoying the shade and the setback while judging passersby.

  • Darthsenio_Mall [he/him]
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    1 year ago

    I really like it, it absolutely looks like a great album cover for the right music. It reminds me of that kind of city pop album art that's inspired by ukiyo-e woodblock prints but modern. First Light and For You come to mind but there's one that's more representative of what I'm trying to say that I straight up cannot think of right now.