Any feedback would be great. I'm just getting started as a liberal rapper


[Intro: Tim Walz]

Yeah

Now

Now is our time

Now is our time

(That-that-that-that-that-that be Timmy Walz)

[Verse 1: Tim Walz]

Everybody vote for us because we're up now

Took the stage, and we’re scoring like we made the touchdown

Swervin' in the rally, polls go up, POTUS not the ballot down

Used to want the VP, now she's fighting for the countdown

Pull up with our vision, got a future we can watch

Whip it up for justice, baby, let’s go out

Let’s go out, put that vote in, don’t stop

Stack our votes, count 'em up, saw a lot

Got the news, not fake news, hit the spot

'Lection day, 1600, that’s the block

Hit the polls, that’s Trump-free

We’re not here to stress, see

Now we’re here to rally

She keep tryna write in me

Gotta tell my bestie

Someone call my bestie

Think I found my bestie

Link up, make the US free

You know that we’re pushing hope, we’ll be voting next week

Know we had to let Joe go ‘cause he can’t suppress me

[Chorus: Kamala Harris]

Uh, walking to the ballot, what it do? (Huh, uh)

Meet me at the rally with the troops (uh)

I got red voters, I got blue (huh, yeah)

Let that vote count and mail it through (huh, uh)

Biden or Kam' Harri', bro, let’s choose (ooh)

We gon’ change the game, bring the truth (uh, uh)

We gon’ take these folks back to school (uh)

Voters on the floor just like some shoes


This is the first verse and chorus. I would appreciate any feedback

Peace

  • culpritus [any]
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    edit-2
    28 days ago

    You can tell this ain't no LLM

    Because you spitting rhymes like L-M M

  • CommunistCuddlefish [she/her]
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    24 days ago

    Congratulations, this hurt to read. I want to see them perform it for real because they specifically hate me