I don't wanna dissect this on a word by word basis versus the title but I feel like this is well meaning but accidently veers off into bootstrap type things on the basis of many of those factors are heavily influenced by economic factors you get born into and if they're not great it'll fuck you out of half of them

Someone working a menial job for 80 hours a week to survive is just not going to have energy to work on their intelligence or skills or health. I mean sure, some people manage, it ain't impossible, but I think setting that as the standard is the way to go.