https://twiiit.com/neilhimself/status/1567127793149820928

  • jizzong [he/him]
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    2 years ago

    Looks increadible. Especially the Khazad-dûm. Not much has happened plot wise but I don't mind a slower pacing.

    Dialog could use some improvements. I think they are trying to sound tolkienesque but who ever wrote some of the lines lacks tolkin's skill.

    Lines like this are clearly just written for the way they sound and not beacuse they make any sense. Not only doesn't light "tread" anywhere, it also looks like it's the middle of the day.

    I'll also never get used to Robert Aramayo as Elrond. I'm pretty positive about the series overall though.

    • GenderIsOpSec [she/her]
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      2 years ago

      Lines like this are clearly just written for the way they sound and not beacuse they make any sense.

      chalked that up to this fucking noldo being a pretentious elf. :data-laughing:

      you're right though some of the writing is trying really hard to ape Tolkien but they dont have his skill for ye olde wordplay.