“the institutional and political crisis that has arisen from an excessively punitive criminal justice system which does not adequately meet the needs of BIPOC and Latinx people and forces them to suffer at the hands of a white-supremacist-associated police force with a penchant for brutality, murder, and oppression needs to end”

Instead of that you could literally just say “defund the police and put that money towards jobs and food” and it would be 100% more successful.

Unless you're trying to write the next great novel or deliver a stirring speech, short sentences and ordinary words are the way to go.