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minus-squareblobjim [he/him]hexbear20·4 years agoReplace last one with "But never had he run a mile" maybe? link
minus-squarehappybadger [he/him]hexbear11·4 years agoDepends on the enunciation of "bravery" in the second line. I pronounce it with two syllables, brave'ry, so it's an eight syllable match to the final line. If it's brave-er-y then it'd need the extra syllable. link
Replace last one with "But never had he run a mile" maybe?
Depends on the enunciation of "bravery" in the second line. I pronounce it with two syllables, brave'ry, so it's an eight syllable match to the final line. If it's brave-er-y then it'd need the extra syllable.
I see it.