I mentioned that I voted, and they naturally asked me who I voted for. I said, "De la Cruz. Third party."

"Sorry, I didn't quite catch that?", one of them said, and the whole group looked at me a bit puzzled — so I reiterated, "De la Cruz, a third-party candidate."

"...Wait, there's a *THIRD* party?"

  • REgon [they/them]
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    2 months ago

    Nationally over 20% of adult americans have a literacy proficiency at or below Level 1

    mac-concern so first of all "nationally" is redundant, so don't jot that down.
    Secondly: 1/5 of adult americans can't read AT ALL?? That's... that's too much.

    Christ that page needs and editor

    The definition of literacy has changed greatly; the term is presently defined as the ability to use printed and written information to function in society, to achieve one's goals, and to develop one's knowledge and potential

    Add quotation marks ffs

    Modern jobs often demand a high literacy level, and its lack in adults and adolescents has been studied extensively.

    Not really relevant to the discussion of literacy in the US. Certainly not in the introduction.

    According to a 1992 survey, about 40 million adults had Level 1 literary competency, the lowest level, comprising understanding only basic written instructions.

    You are adding it as a source, just write the claim and add the year the claim was made.

    A number of reports and studies are published annually to monitor the nation's status, and initiatives to improve literacy rates are funded by government and external sources

    Should be the first sentence if you're going to include it at all.

    • InevitableSwing [none/use name]
      ·
      2 months ago

      The funny thing is that the page was already bad ~6 months ago. I assume there's endless editor squabbling so the page becomes a bigger and bigger mess.

    • Belly_Beanis [he/him]
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      2 months ago

      Christ that page needs an editor

      "You're asking questions already explained by the shirt."