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  • happybadger [he/him]
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    4 years ago

    In memory of Private Pyle

    A man known for bravery and guile

    With guns and a will

    He stormed capitol hill

    But never had run a mile

    • blobjim [he/him]
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      4 years ago

      Replace last one with "But never had he run a mile" maybe?

      • happybadger [he/him]
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        4 years ago

        Depends on the enunciation of "bravery" in the second line. I pronounce it with two syllables, brave'ry, so it's an eight syllable match to the final line. If it's brave-er-y then it'd need the extra syllable.