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minus-squarehappybadger [he/him]hexbear44·4 years agoIn memory of Private Pyle A man known for bravery and guile With guns and a will He stormed capitol hill But never had run a mile link
minus-squareblobjim [he/him]hexbear20·4 years agoReplace last one with "But never had he run a mile" maybe? link
minus-squarehappybadger [he/him]hexbear11·4 years agoDepends on the enunciation of "bravery" in the second line. I pronounce it with two syllables, brave'ry, so it's an eight syllable match to the final line. If it's brave-er-y then it'd need the extra syllable. link
In memory of Private Pyle
A man known for bravery and guile
With guns and a will
He stormed capitol hill
But never had run a mile
Replace last one with "But never had he run a mile" maybe?
Depends on the enunciation of "bravery" in the second line. I pronounce it with two syllables, brave'ry, so it's an eight syllable match to the final line. If it's brave-er-y then it'd need the extra syllable.
I see it.
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