• NewLeaf
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    9 months ago

    More like run on sentence horror.

    , : ; doing a lot of heavy lifting

    • Adkml [he/him]
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      9 months ago

      Seriously it defeats the purpose of being two sentence horror if both "sentences" are just a full paragraph with no punctuation.

      • Dessa [she/her]
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        9 months ago

        Using find and replace on War and Peace to replace all periods with commas and claim victory over the sub

    • Egon
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      3 months ago

      deleted by creator

  • TerminalEncounter [she/her]
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    9 months ago

    There's a little tiny nugget of an interesting horror idea here, maybe reflecting the artificiality of suburban American dream nuclear family life, maybe that it's all a lie and the people you love and count on could abandon you any second, but it was done in the most awkward way - and tying kink is just weird lol. I don't think anyone could do a 24/7 dynamic and then just... walk away lol

    • CarmineCatboy2 [he/him]
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      9 months ago

      but it was done in the most awkward way

      This is the real horror. Making it about kink aside, this gave me flashbacks of being unable to explain ideas as a child.

      • PKMKII [none/use name]
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        9 months ago

        Yeah this screams teenager with decent imagination and a critical eye towards social constructs, but hasn’t developed the skills to express those in a smooth, articulate manner.

    • Egon
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      3 months ago

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  • DamarcusArt@lemmygrad.ml
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    9 months ago

    If your two sentence horror requires an essay to actually make sense, it isn't really "two sentence" horror, is it?

  • LENINSGHOSTFACEKILLA [he/him]M
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    9 months ago

    Two sentence horror is always garbage. Its always a run on sentence with bad punctuation that overexplains bullshit and then "but baby ded"

  • BeanBoy [she/her]
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    9 months ago

    shines flashlight under face

    but it wasn’t 😱

  • AlkaliMarxist
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    9 months ago

    That sub is really scary

    if you're a punctuation mark.

  • plinky [he/him]
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    9 months ago

    Trying my hand at two sentence horror:

    It’s my 80 anniversary. Walmart has promised i will get shorter shift today and a donut.

    • disco [any]
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      9 months ago

      You should post this one in the subreddit.

  • eight [it/its]
    hexagon
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    9 months ago

    My apologies if this one missed the mark. Here is the explanation: pee pee poo poo

    • Egon
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      3 months ago

      deleted by creator

      • DyingOfDeBordom [none/use name]
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        9 months ago

        It's nice having some nerd explain cultural and linguistic nuances instead of just like editing rice cakes into donuts

        • omenmis [she/her]
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          9 months ago

          modern manga fan scanlators have found a really nice medium of putting the translation notes in the afterword and only really for major things like cultural differences. i really like how they handle it.

    • RyanGosling [none/use name]
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      9 months ago

      Doubtful. The “artificial sexual life” trope has been around for a while now. Most recently, Her and Blade Runner 2049 come to mind